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Monday, October 15, 2012

JUST VAMPING













Bats roll
buzzards troll
freaks plague
your tormented soul
and we are waiting...

We dance by day
we dance by night
here to give you
such a fright
and we are waiting...

Brothers and sisters
we are waiting...
mothers and fathers
we are waiting...
sons and daughters
we are waiting...
sons of bitches
we are waiting...

Angels and whores trade places
in a moonlit masquerade

Zombies dance
without any pants

And we are waiting...
for THE NIGHT !

60 comments:

  1. You nicely summed up the twelve years I went to Xian church. Thank you for this. Fun, indelible-image work.

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  2. so you bring us into the right halloween mood...shivers...

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  3. hahaa zombies without pants...now that's the stuff of nightmares. Loved the read very enjoyable! Liked that you went all halloweeny on us!

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  4. great Halloween take!

    Hope they don't keep waiting for too long :)

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  5. TOO COOL Tim..loved the ending line! so yeah..we are waiting..:)

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  6. hey how did you know about the no pants thing...lol. nice one shot...just right for this week...BOO!

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  7. Zombe dance in the moonlight.

    I'll be prepared with my moonbeam

    Thanks for the great Halloween start off for One Shot

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  8. This made me laugh. Thanks for the fun.

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  9. Such a THRILLER - rock 'n roll zombies dancing in a conga line. Fine Walpurgis Night - Thanks, Gay @beachanny

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  10. Its coming......the night some fear, a night I adore. Fun one shot. :)

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  11. Waiting indeed. Nice One Shot. Love and Light, Sender

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  12. WHo would not...after reading this inviting . come halloween with 'sons of bitches'... liked that
    ;)

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  13. Waiting...yes. "Freaks plague..." Good stuff.

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  14. Great pre-Halloween madness in your poetry. Nice one shot.

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  15. great for halloween!! much love, cindy

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  16. Thanks to all you FREAKS who have commented so far: STEVE, CLAUDIA, REPRESSED SOUL, KODJO DEYNOO,GABRIELA, DESERT ROSE, BRIAN, MOONDUST, MAUREEN, GAY, RIVER, SENDERUPWORDS, DULCE, SCOTT, SUZICATE (I "askeered" too!)BEN, CINDY (love back) BELINDA...

    NEXT?

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  17. Another excellent write! Inspired to try a Halloween poem after reading your work. Thanks, Timoteo. Great poetry.

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  18. Great poetry. Great giggle. Loved it.

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  19. The Zombies with no pants stopped me short. Nice.

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  20. What a fun Halloween poem! Makes me want to wander the night (with a camera and bodyguard)!

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  21. If you wait too long, all the Halloween candy will be gone. Fortunately, the chances are good I'll buy more. I like your funny pieces, Tim. A little laughter can often do me a lot of good.

    p.s.: I just read your little profile blurb and I'll have you know that I am often passionately ignorant!

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  22. Very interesting.. I enjoyed it so much.. thanks for sharing..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  23. OH la la, I do love this, wow you are so gifted

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  24. "Zombies dance/without any pants"??? That settles it. No Trick-or-Treating for me this year.

    So clever! I love this.

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  25. KOBICO,
    So happy to hear that. I'll be knocking on your door on Halloween, dressed like Pee Wee Herman! You get a pass on the passionately ignorant thing because you are often passionately brilliant as well!

    LORRAINE,
    Actually I'm a RE-GIFTER, especially at
    Christmas time!

    PATTI KEN,
    Hey, that's just when trick or treating gets to be really interesting! LOL

    DUSTUS, JERRY, TERESA, SHASHI:

    So nice to see you visiting me again!

    And TAMMY, welcome aboard...I'm Captain Steubing!

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  26. Creepy goodness! Well done and Happy Halloween! :) ~April

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  27. Angels and whores trade places
    in a moonlit masquerade...

    My favourite lines!

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  28. Great seasonal poem! You put a hump day smile on my face

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  29. you write beautiful poetry,
    your words ring like wisdom bell.

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  30. I nearly spat my drink at the no pants zombies bit. Freakin' fabulous, my friend! :)

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  31. O Dear! I hope they will continue to wait forever! They are so scary!

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  32. And Scary they are! Thanks MONA, BETWEENHEARTS75, ERIC, KERRY, STEVEN, JINGLE, MAMA ZEN, and TONY (getting you to spit the drinks is what I aim for!)

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  33. excellent halloween share...zombies dancing with no pants...imagine the maggots on show!!!!

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  34. What would a Halloween boogie be without a few sons of bitches and whores?

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  35. well that's an exciting, frightening romp!

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  36. It is that time of year! How exciting it must be around you on Halloween!

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  37. All are in anticipation of Halloween. Gives me the creeps! Nicely Tim!

    Hank

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  38. KERRY: My favorite kind of folks!

    LAURA, TERESA, KAYKUALA, PATRICIA: Y'all are so great it's scary!

    MARIAN: BOO!

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  39. the monster mash....haha...that was my first thought...its a graveyard smash you know....a little undead in your life is not a bad thing though....grins..

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  40. Bringing back the oldies--in more ways than one. You know I love the Halloween spirit in all forms--though I think there is some darkness hiding in your kandy korn--and everyone knows proper attire for the Undead includes (or doesn't)trousers which have rotted off in noisome bits--never a fashion faux-pas from you, Timo

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  41. Ooooh. The repetition of the line "We are waiting" really creates an eerie feeling here. Nice job. I am waiting for that night.

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  42. Laughing my ass off @ "Sons of Bitches we are waiting"

    Good stuff

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  43. fun..fun..fun...vamping it up -- waiting for The Day, the Man, the Vampira. Loved it!

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  44. Halloween's approaching! Love this time of year and the poetry it inspires..... Do ya think you could send some of those pantless zombies my way? Not sure what I'll do with 'em but if you can't beat 'em the join 'em, right?

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  45. Waiting ... Halloween, bla bla bla ... Who cares ... Thousands of miles apart and knowing ... is worth the wait ... hmmm?

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    1. Actualy, there is much more of "bla bla bla" ... to my comment ... Because I'm downright petrified of the the whole Halloween thing here in North America ... There is so much blood and gore going on in the world already ... why, the heck, make this into an annual cheerful game ... I will never understand ... and if I ever meet an adult party goer hallowener on my way to work, I swear I will harm him ...

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  46. Everything you write intrigues me more about you.... a luminous spirit lightening the darkness in the world...xj

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  47. BRIAN: One of my favorite tunes!

    HEDGEWITCH: Thanks, darlin. I try to stay on top of it, you know.

    MYRNA, FESTIVALKING, BEACHANNY: Thanks so much, gals and ghouls!

    JOHN: Pantless zombies seem to be in demand, so I'm starting an agency where you can hire them out for parties and stuff!

    CAT: Thanks for your assessment of the poem (bla bla bla!)

    JEN: THAT is truly one of the sweetest things anyone has ever said to me.

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  48. the politicians' drippimg fangs
    with the blood of tax
    convulsing in these media prangs
    they howl imagined facts

    Halloween... introduces election week.
    :<) _m

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  49. MAGYAR: "Imagined facts" was the key phrase from the debates last night!

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  50. bwahahaha - fun - aloha Timoteo - wow with all those creatures waiting i'm sure glad they are waiting. for that night. i might have to make myself scarce around that time. ...or join them. ha. aloha.

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  51. RICK: Probably best to join them...I've never seen zombies try to eat each other...they only seem to like regular folks...they look at each other and say, eeeeuuuuwwww...I ain't eatin' THAT!

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