Love me like a fist
Spray me like a skunk in heat
Leave on a cruise liner to India
Put your hands together in prayer
Make a bee-line for the nearest exit
Tell three people what you did in the bathroom on September 17, 1982
Pay your bills before the grace period ends
Have lunch with a guy named Shlomo
Slap your ass and admit that it's real
Be a mean mama jama and spin like a wheel
Toss your hat and your cookies into the ring
Groove on the wonder of EV-ER-Y-THING
This is interesting Tim...makes me a bit curious....I always thought how our foreign guests looked at Indians -- and spoke with some on train journeys...one of them said "food is interesting, but can't have it" :)
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Wow that is so cool Timoteo, you can write anything, this is kind of jazzy and 'in your face' type of poetry, I'm very impressed!
ReplyDeleteDEVIKA,
ReplyDeleteI LOVE the food, but now I know enough not to order a curry dish "hot." I get it mild and that's plenty spicy for me! LOL
LORRAINE,
Thanks...it seems the only place where I got "rhythm" is in my poetry :)
hahaha...i know, i know :)
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*slap!* It's real.
ReplyDeleteKOBICO.
ReplyDeleteNow, didn't that feel good?
Actually, it kind of stung a bit. I've just noticed that the flash from the camera makes everyone's eyes look like they're possessed!
ReplyDeleteIt takes all sorts to make this world!
ReplyDeletethrow your hands in the air like they don't care!
ReplyDeletesoon you'll be wearing purple. or one of those damn red hats.
love this, actually.
Now that is a party ;D
ReplyDeleteFun to read~
Yup! I want to be there now--fun read!!!
ReplyDeleteI love it! Nothing like movin' and groovin' on a Monday!
ReplyDeleteI feel like dancing now!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the realness of this one!
ReplyDeletei like the beat you got going on man...wondering at what happened on that date, a bit, but hey my ass is real...lol...you got me moving man
ReplyDeleteSo much wise advice is contained in this one!
ReplyDeleteHow can I just sit here without complimenting you like a mad hatter who lost her hat, salute you like you're the last country on earth, dance with your words like they're a salsa... awesome write!
ReplyDeleteKERRY, MARIAN, ELLA, AUDREY, TERESA, LAURA, UNDERTHETOADSTOOL, KIM, JENNY: Thanks for slapping your cabooses along with this one!
ReplyDeleteBRIAN: As long as we know our ass is real, we have something to hang onto in this world!
SERENA: Your comment is pure poetry...love it!
Oh Yes! Take life by the scruff of the neck and live it!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Haha - this is great! My ass is all too real! But I'll try not to toss my cookies! And, hey, thanks for the really nice comment on my 'Other' poem. xo
ReplyDeleteHYPERCRYPTICAL: Or grab it by the short hairs!
ReplyDeleteOTHER MARY: It's all true...and more!
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