Tuesday, January 2, 2018
SHOUTING DISTANCE
To kick off the new year, here's a freebie for you from my book Last Tango In Timbuktu
The rain came before sunrise
in steady sheets
like the one I was trying
to pull over my head
I was just out of a dream
where I was whispering into the ear
of a woman who seemed to be
my counselor
or confidante
a dream where I had speculated about
the sex of a pencil
It was long
a real woody
and it could prick you
when it's sharp
no wait...erase that
It was worn
past the last hurrah
like a space ship
in the shape of a cigar
(And when hers was worn down to the nubbin
Sylvia Plath stuck her head in the oven)
It made so much sense to say
that I am my brother's keeper
but of course the other side had just claimed
that we'll get you to the promised land
in just a little different way
Let us fly and make our own mistakes
don't need a hand or a handout
of course that's the way where
crash and burn
is followed in sequence by
oh shit
oh well
The rain had no intention
of letting up
as dawn's curtain lifted slowly
the new year now within shouting distance
And in the dream I was giddy
as I breathed into her ear
that I didn't know whether to laugh
or to cry
The culmination of a lifetime
of fledgling flight
Don't be concerned
if I crash and burn
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This is hilarious! Love these lines:
ReplyDelete"a dream where I had speculated about
the sex of a pencil"
"no wait...erase that"
"Don't be concerned
if I crash and burn" Great ending.
"... to forget time, to forgive life, to be at peace" S.Plath ... some people only need a cat's purr to forget, forgive and find ... no wait ... erase that ... hand me a cigar, will you ...
ReplyDeletewow, all that from some rain and a little snuggle...my sex dreams always involve redwoods but if pencils...well...ahem...any crash you can walk away from...just like a dream...
ReplyDeleteTim, this is truly wonderful. Playful. And dreamlike. Is it ok to have a favorite of yours? This is mine so far! Love.
ReplyDeletewell, i will be concerned. so don't do that. stick around and write more, we will all read and enjoy! and even be enlightened. thanks.
ReplyDeleteJASMINECALYX: Me glad you likey!
ReplyDeleteCAT: You cut a fine figure with that cigar in your lips.
BRIAN: Redwoods, eh? I've heard some bragging in my day, but...
JENNY: Wow, your favorite? Now I'm glad I wrote it!
MARIAN: Okay...for your sake if nothing else!
Shine, Timo, shine fine ... :)
Delete"The culmination of a lifetime of fledgling flight" - brilliant, Timo!!!!
ReplyDeleteTHis is just brilliant. One of your best. Hope you are enjoying the Christmas season xxx
ReplyDeleteI like "oh shit, oh well." I suppose it could evoke different emotions. For me it gives me permission to take joy in my life as it flows, sometimes with debris and sometimes with shiney baubles that delight me. (Often, out of the debris, I can create shiney baubles that delight me.)
ReplyDeletea few of my fav things in here: Plath, pencils, dreams, & that earthy shit (that never stinks of course)
ReplyDeleteSome of my favorite things too...as in the song! (And that earthy shit is what I'm all about--lol--thanks, Angie!
Delete"I didnt know whether to laugh or cry"....laughter, always. The whole premise of existence is prone to laughter. Smiles. Always good reading you, Tim.
ReplyDeleteExactly, Sherry. That's why I write poems like "Cosmic Joke" (below)
ReplyDeleteI think with dreams like this a shrink would actually hesitate before grabbing a pencil to write it down...
ReplyDeleteGood observation--lol
DeleteThis was fun..made me giddy with glee :)
ReplyDeleteSo glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteHappy New Year, friend ... and Happy New Ear ... smiles and purrs ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteHappy Nude Year to you!
DeleteHey, Tim. Happy New Year. This is a great share!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kerry! Sending you my best wishes for the New Year!
DeleteYou obviously had lots of fun writing this one!
ReplyDeleteYou are right...it still makes me grin :)
DeleteWell it seems your pencil had enough lead in it to pen a superlative poem...oh wait...you typed it right? ;)
ReplyDeleteI put it down on paper first, so technically you are right!
Delete__ I like my mechanical pencils; always ready, just push the eraser and fresh lead appears. _m
ReplyDeletereset pencil
in pushing the button
new words
How nice if we all had a similar reset button :) Hope the new year has been kind to you so far, my friend.
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