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Friday, May 13, 2011

SENRYU STEW # 4



















actress photographed

without makeup--

right cross to the jaw





miniskirts so short

these days--

midgets get their kicks





watchin' those old movies

drinkin' some beers...

can film festival


26 comments:

  1. Brevity--I love it! I wish I could self edit.

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  2. SHARON,
    I'm finding with senryu that it's not the quantity, but the quality! Smiles!

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  3. So perfect! I, too, cant believe the "length" - ??? - of those mini skirts.......love the can film festival! Love the humor, Tim.

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  4. Lots of fun with this trilogy. I love the "can film festival."

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  5. Can film festival....clever !

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  6. lol - I love them all, but the Can Film Festival cracked me up, Tim!

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  7. That is funny! Thanks for a laugh. Great poetic work. My potluck: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/05/16/protect/

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  8. How fun...espcially the can film festival.

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  9. black and white
    in this old-time movie
    a fourth stooge

    A good read... as always Timoteo! _m

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  10. Seems so far that most of you like the "can film festival." I'll drink to that!

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  11. cute and profound words.
    Thanks form sharing...

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  12. Ha - each a great Senryu
    I cant decide - all 3!!!

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  13. ha. each one gave different chuckles...hmm on the midgets had not thought of that...

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  14. not sure if the can film festival is the cannes film festival we have in france....but doesn't matter..the miniskirts are the same all over the world..nice!

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  15. HA! I love it when you're frivolous.

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  16. This is such fun. I love it.

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  17. CLAUDIA,
    It is a similar film festival, just with more belching.

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  18. for real on the mini-skirts (and short-shorts). i guess no one likes to use the imagination anymore - too much work, lol. you always make me smile when i visit, so thank you once again.

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  19. Funny, good word play. Senryu indeed well done. Gay

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  20. voyeur astronaut
    claims, "if hemlines get higher,
    they'll shoot into space"

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  21. some great word play here....enjoyed this...pete

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  22. MATT,
    I wish I had thought of that one!

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  23. Working in a middle school, the short skirts are scary. Great work.

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  24. Enjoyed your post. Thanks for your comment on mine. It must have been interesting to be in the middle of all that gossip and to know the latest tidbit!

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  25. ANNELL,
    Yeah...of course, customers didn't know I was listening, so I was privy to the juiciest conversations!

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  26. Fantastic collection of tercets for One Shot my friend...I have to say my favorite goes to the midgets ;) ~ Rose

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