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Friday, May 13, 2011

SENRYU STEW # 4



















actress photographed

without makeup--

right cross to the jaw



miniskirts so short

these days--

midgets get their kicks



watchin' those old movies

drinkin' some beers...

Can Film Festival


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26 comments:

  1. Sharon DayMay 13, 2011 at 4:06 PM

    Brevity--I love it! I wish I could self edit.

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  2. TimoteoMay 13, 2011 at 4:36 PM

    SHARON,
    I'm finding with senryu that it's not the quantity, but the quality! Smiles!

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  3. Sherry Blue SkyMay 13, 2011 at 7:48 PM

    So perfect! I, too, cant believe the "length" - ??? - of those mini skirts.......love the can film festival! Love the humor, Tim.

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  4. ArleneWKWMay 13, 2011 at 10:44 PM

    Lots of fun with this trilogy. I love the "can film festival."

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  5. ayalaMay 14, 2011 at 4:06 PM

    Can film festival....clever !

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  6. TALONMay 14, 2011 at 7:10 PM

    lol - I love them all, but the Can Film Festival cracked me up, Tim!

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  7. AnonymousMay 16, 2011 at 9:46 AM

    That is funny! Thanks for a laugh. Great poetic work. My potluck: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/05/16/protect/

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  8. VictoriaMay 16, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    How fun...espcially the can film festival.

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  9. MagyarMay 16, 2011 at 5:18 PM

    black and white
    in this old-time movie
    a fourth stooge

    A good read... as always Timoteo! _m

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  10. TimoteoMay 16, 2011 at 6:54 PM

    Seems so far that most of you like the "can film festival." I'll drink to that!

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  11. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMay 17, 2011 at 12:09 PM

    cute and profound words.
    Thanks form sharing...

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  12. moondustwriterMay 17, 2011 at 2:25 PM

    Ha - each a great Senryu
    I cant decide - all 3!!!

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  13. Brian MillerMay 17, 2011 at 2:35 PM

    ha. each one gave different chuckles...hmm on the midgets had not thought of that...

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  14. ClaudiaMay 17, 2011 at 2:36 PM

    not sure if the can film festival is the cannes film festival we have in france....but doesn't matter..the miniskirts are the same all over the world..nice!

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  15. hedgewitchMay 17, 2011 at 2:51 PM

    HA! I love it when you're frivolous.

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  16. PattiKenMay 17, 2011 at 2:58 PM

    This is such fun. I love it.

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  17. TimoteoMay 17, 2011 at 3:29 PM

    CLAUDIA,
    It is a similar film festival, just with more belching.

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  18. UnknownMay 17, 2011 at 4:39 PM

    for real on the mini-skirts (and short-shorts). i guess no one likes to use the imagination anymore - too much work, lol. you always make me smile when i visit, so thank you once again.

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  19. BeachannyMay 17, 2011 at 5:16 PM

    Funny, good word play. Senryu indeed well done. Gay

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  20. UnknownMay 17, 2011 at 9:01 PM

    voyeur astronaut
    claims, "if hemlines get higher,
    they'll shoot into space"

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  21. MarshyMay 18, 2011 at 7:01 AM

    some great word play here....enjoyed this...pete

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  22. TimoteoMay 18, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    MATT,
    I wish I had thought of that one!

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  23. TeresaMay 18, 2011 at 6:46 PM

    Working in a middle school, the short skirts are scary. Great work.

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  24. annell4May 19, 2011 at 7:54 AM

    Enjoyed your post. Thanks for your comment on mine. It must have been interesting to be in the middle of all that gossip and to know the latest tidbit!

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  25. TimoteoMay 19, 2011 at 8:17 AM

    ANNELL,
    Yeah...of course, customers didn't know I was listening, so I was privy to the juiciest conversations!

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  26. UnknownMay 19, 2011 at 8:34 AM

    Fantastic collection of tercets for One Shot my friend...I have to say my favorite goes to the midgets ;) ~ Rose

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