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Monday, August 20, 2012
rotting fruits and vegetables
atop the compost heap--
breeze wafting my way


spring rain
tires splashing--
you dripping by


sexy dream
suddenly interrupted...
cat's paws
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22 comments:

  1. BubbaMarch 25, 2011 at 10:55 AM

    Hitting the right notes in so few words - the mark of a true wordsmith, Timoteo!

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  2. Teri and her Stylish Adventure Cats March 25, 2011 at 1:07 PM

    all very visual, even the wrinkled nose I felt...great stuff!

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  3. MagyarMarch 26, 2011 at 3:59 AM

    __I wonder if a soft snore sounds like a cats purr... to a cat. Purr... snore, the cat's
    'pause'?
    __Like it Timoteo! _m

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  4. LorraineMarch 26, 2011 at 5:12 AM

    Wow that's almost my life, except I don't compost,not now not ever...but I do recycle :) I like your writing style Tim

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  5. MarianAugust 20, 2012 at 8:41 AM

    YOURS is a naughty poem ;)

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  6. SreejaAugust 20, 2012 at 8:44 AM

    woww...short and so full....enjoyed this....

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  7. PattiKenAugust 20, 2012 at 9:31 AM

    Liked these a lot. I am all too familiar with the feline-us interruptus at dawn ("where's my breakfast?!") problem. So many dreams lost.

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  8. Kerry O'ConnorAugust 20, 2012 at 11:21 AM

    Somehow I knew you would have a wild way with senryu.

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  9. TimoteoAugust 20, 2012 at 1:35 PM

    MARIAN: Nice deflection!

    SREEJA: Nice to meet you--thanks so much for the visit!

    PATTIKEN: So many dreams lost, but it's nice to be licked upon awakening, anyway! ;)

    KERRY: You know me well, my dear.

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  10. Susie ClevengerAugust 20, 2012 at 1:37 PM

    I love these..everything form compost to kitty.

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  11. TimoteoAugust 20, 2012 at 5:21 PM

    SUZIE: Thanks so much. One of the ads now running below is for a CAT BOX!

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  12. kaykualaAugust 20, 2012 at 7:30 PM

    What a shame! I would want any sexy dreams to linger on,Tim! Wonderful write!

    Hank

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  13. TeresaAugust 20, 2012 at 7:42 PM

    I can truly relate to that compost pile, and I need to add a lot more to it. Gotta love those cat paws!

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  14. AnonymousAugust 20, 2012 at 11:17 PM

    WOW. This line is SOOOO good: "you dripping by"

    And then you follow it up with that last stanza. Really like this. :)

    "sexy dream
    suddenly interrupted...
    cat's paws"

    Fun and disappointing. Better (complete) dreams tonight, I hope.

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  15. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerAugust 21, 2012 at 12:18 PM

    Ah--loved these--you wild man!

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  16. ClaudiaAugust 21, 2012 at 1:13 PM

    see...this is why i don't have a cat...ha..smiles

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  17. TimoteoAugust 21, 2012 at 1:22 PM

    KAYKUALA, TERESA, FLIPSIDERECORDS, AUDREY (you wild woman): Thanks, y'all. There will be more sexy dreams...uh...I hope anyway.

    CLAUDIA: What foresight you have!

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  18. Brian MillerAugust 21, 2012 at 1:57 PM

    how you get from rotting fruit to sex dreams...i dunno...the cat would learn to live outside as well....smiles....

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  19. ayalaAugust 21, 2012 at 2:18 PM

    Fun :)

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  20. AnonymousAugust 21, 2012 at 3:10 PM

    I hate it when that happens! Damn cat! LOL!

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  21. Beth WinterAugust 21, 2012 at 5:30 PM

    Scent, sounds, sensations and intimacy interrupted all in so few words? Wonderful.

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  22. The PoetAugust 22, 2012 at 7:10 PM

    Dear friend,
    Great poem with a cute and funny ending. Kiss the cat for me (LOL). Thanks for sharing.

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