HE SAID...
In retrospect, my life has been
a blue blur of contradiction
a rolling juggernaut of misjudgment
charging headlong through the rain
and pissing into the wind...
A constellation of calamity
chasing dust devil dreams
down a star speckled highway
in a last-ditch attempt
to catch the champagne
night flight to nirvana...
SHE SAID...
Well, HELL then...here's my phone number!
LOL Love your writing, especially the ending, but Gosh you're so dead...lol brilliant!
ReplyDeleteLorraine,
ReplyDeleteAnd you're so darn...CUTE!
You have a whole different side to you than just the movie reviews. Great!
ReplyDeleteOh that was Great!! Loved it!!
ReplyDeleteVery nice and you have touched that part of me that stirs with the wind and echoes the calls of each dark night. Oh I am captured, laid out naked upon the branches of pen and paper. Seduced I am by the words of a stranger.
ReplyDeleteT
Seems we can all relate... good one.
ReplyDelete_I relate to the rusty fastener. _m
Laughed out loud when I read this one. Perfect. So you.
ReplyDeleteOMG! LOL you are brilliant!
ReplyDelete:)
smart piece.
ReplyDeleteenjoyed the flow.
Thanks for sharing!
A+
GABRIELA,
ReplyDeleteSo glad you liked it!
JINGLE,
Wow...I'll take that rating anytime...thanks!
This is primo-- wonderful. thanks and thanks for reading me too. xxxj
ReplyDeletelol! Tim, you never fail to amaze me. You've got the most unique poetic voice...just tickles me!
ReplyDeletePlus your sense of humor never fails to shine.
I just love coming here for a a great laugh. Your poem is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteJEN,
ReplyDeleteAlways enjoy your stuff.
TALON,
Happy to be tickling you from afar (I got really long arms!)
TERESA,
Always nice having you...what's in the basket?
Greetings!
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all's well that end's well
ReplyDeleteAmazing work...
ReplyDelete"A constellation of calamity
chasing dust devil dreams
down a star speckled highway"
Love these lines...Merry Christmas :)
I SO LOVE THIS!!!!!!!! It could not be more perfect!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHa! At least she knows what she's getting into! :-)
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