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Friday, December 10, 2010

ROMANCE IN ALL ITS GLORY









HE SAID...

In retrospect, my life has been

a blue blur of contradiction

a rolling juggernaut of misjudgment

charging headlong through the rain

and pissing into the wind...

A constellation of calamity

chasing dust devil dreams

down a star speckled highway

in a last-ditch attempt

to catch the champagne

night flight to nirvana...

SHE SAID...

Well, HELL then...here's my phone number!

21 comments:

  1. LOL Love your writing, especially the ending, but Gosh you're so dead...lol brilliant!

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  2. Lorraine,
    And you're so darn...CUTE!

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  3. You have a whole different side to you than just the movie reviews. Great!

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  4. Oh that was Great!! Loved it!!

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  5. Very nice and you have touched that part of me that stirs with the wind and echoes the calls of each dark night. Oh I am captured, laid out naked upon the branches of pen and paper. Seduced I am by the words of a stranger.

    T

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  6. Seems we can all relate... good one.
    _I relate to the rusty fastener. _m

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  7. Laughed out loud when I read this one. Perfect. So you.

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  8. smart piece.
    enjoyed the flow.

    Thanks for sharing!

    A+

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  9. GABRIELA,
    So glad you liked it!

    JINGLE,
    Wow...I'll take that rating anytime...thanks!

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  10. This is primo-- wonderful. thanks and thanks for reading me too. xxxj

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  11. lol! Tim, you never fail to amaze me. You've got the most unique poetic voice...just tickles me!

    Plus your sense of humor never fails to shine.

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  12. I just love coming here for a a great laugh. Your poem is wonderful!

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  13. JEN,
    Always enjoy your stuff.

    TALON,
    Happy to be tickling you from afar (I got really long arms!)

    TERESA,
    Always nice having you...what's in the basket?

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  14. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/the-celebrate-blogger-of-2010-awards-nomination-announcement/

    welcome voting,
    you are nominated, you win one vote,
    if you join us and vote for others, you win another vote, then you win at least a honorable mention award.

    Good Luck!
    Happy Wednesday!

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  15. Greetings!
    Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy!

    End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

    At this time of the year, We wish you all the best !

    Link up a poem to our potluck today, We send blessings all the way to brighten your day!

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  16. Amazing work...

    "A constellation of calamity
    chasing dust devil dreams
    down a star speckled highway"

    Love these lines...Merry Christmas :)

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  17. Greetings!

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    Enter your entry here if you are ready

    Hope to see you in, Happy Friday, best wishes for the year of 2011.

    xoxox

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  18. I SO LOVE THIS!!!!!!!! It could not be more perfect!!!!!!!!!

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  19. Ha! At least she knows what she's getting into! :-)

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