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Thursday, May 16, 2013

PALOOPA







Imaginary Garden With Real Toads--d'Verse Poets Pub







palapa 
paloopa
papa loppa
papa loopa
poopa loppa
papa la papa
paloop aloppa
loppa papa
loppa la poopa
paloop
pallop
palopola papa
papa la papa la poopa la poppa
lollipapa
lollipoopa

papa la poopa lollipopa lollipoopa poppa loopa la poopa loopa poopa pa loopa 

palapa la papa
paloop
pallop

paloopalop
palloopa
pallopa
paloopa

plop 
pop
plop 

poop
poop
plop

plop...

plop...

plop...

poop

25 comments:

  1. haha....fun sounds...i think....
    just dont smell up the room...smiles.

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  2. ... "http://www.youtube.com/embed/ppZld3ero1s?rel=0" ... paw ... pop ... :)

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  3. CAT: Yes, that kind of puts it in perspective!

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  4. BRIAN: I may have already stunk it up with this one!

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  5. There is a certain melodious quality in this, but could be time to get off the pot!

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  6. How fun and funny this is, ha ~

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  7. KERRY: He likes to make a running commentary along with his poo poo.

    GRACE: Glad you liked it!

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  8. Truth, you lifted this melodious, odoriferous song from a toddler?

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  9. SUSAN: Yes...my INNER toddler! The child is father to the man.

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  10. MARIAN: Heh heh...I don't know if anyone has noticed, but I only used four different letters in the entire poem..."P" "A" "L" and "O"
    Hey, there's a challenge for you--write a poem using 4, and only 4 letters of your choice!

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  11. Oh, Timoteo, this is too funny. Stream of consciousness, with a few poops in the stream! Sometimes you just have to let go and be silly, and this is a perfect example. I am grinning from ear to ear right now. I remember my daughter love saying the word "poop," too, like it was a kid swear... Thanks for that! Amy

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  12. HAHAHA. You made me laugh. I won't tell anybody what I understood from this musical poem.
    Blessings...
    Rita

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  13. AMY: Thanks so much. I just figured everybody could use a good "poop" in the morning.

    RITA: Love it that I can put a smile on your face half way across the globe!

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  14. Definitely stuck in loop here.... ;)

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  15. This is so fun to read aloud, Timoteo...it's the kind of word-work that gets under your skin! Reminds me a bit of dadaism.

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  16. Yeah, that sounds about right!

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  17. Laughing out loud over here, Tim. Yes, we all do this...but not so whimsically or so funnily (I think...I only really know what I do) :)

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  18. L: Yes, it's loopy alright.

    VICTORIA: Yeah, didn't Dada start with baby talk? You know, like "da da...ma ma"

    AUDREY: Thanks. we aim to please.

    NICO: Thanks for plopping...er...I mean dropping in!

    RALLENTANDA: Well, if you want to make a LITERAL interpretation. (Ha Ha...you win the gold star!)

    TALON: YOU do this too? Gee, we should collaborate on a nonsense poem.

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  19. Oh my, this is too funny, Timoteo. Looks like you had fun here.

    Pamela

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  20. FLAUBERT: Thanks. It was a gas.

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  21. Thanks so much! I truly needed a laugh this afternoon!

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  22. RAZZAMADAZZLE: Hope this got you out of your "poopy" mood!

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