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Saturday, August 28, 2010

LOVERS

They met at the bar.

She was an aspiring lawyer who was taking the exam.

He was a former McDonald's owner--one of the truly disenfranchised. A born again skeptic of reincarnation, he could remember nothing of the deja vu experience he was having.

He said: "Haven't I seen you someplace before?"

She said: "No...I've never been anyplace before."

He said: "Let's blow this pop stand."

She said: "Let's buy a soda first."

He said: "Now is the hour."

She said: "Just give me a minute."

They lived together on Easy Street...until one day they came to a fork in the road. Feeling like she could stick a knife in his back, she spoon-fed him the truth.

She told him to go take a short walk off a long pier--which he tried, several times, but found that he could never quite reach the end.

"Stop dead in your tracks while I find something to murder you with," she cried.

"You kill me," he laughed.

She said: "There can be no other words for what you are...in other words...you make me sick and I'm going to ralf!"

He said: "I knew there was another man!"

She looked around and said, "Where?"

"This is all too confusing," he said. "I want a divorce."

She said: "If you need a good lawyer, I'm available."

"You're available? he said.

She looked him up and down. "Say...haven't I seen you someplace before?"



34 comments:

  1. Oh my gosh, Tim, that was awesome! I even went back and read it two more times! How in the world did you come up with that?

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  2. LINDA,
    All I can remember is it came into my head while I was scratching my foot...glad you likey !

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  3. Loved it, Tim! This is playing with words in the neatest way! All those expressions and how it circles back - awesome. You need to scratch your other foot and see what happens :)

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  4. Hey Tim, this was awesome!!! But you always are!! I closed In My Heart and now have a new blog.. Needed a new beginning. Take care!!

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  5. This is so awesome... I absolutely love it! =D

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  6. She's a lawyer....what's his excuse? lol
    MOST EXCELLENT LOL

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  7. TALON,
    You scratch my foot and I'll scratch yours...

    CINDY,
    Great to hear from you--wondered where you were!

    DUCHESS,
    Thank you my dear!

    LORRAINE,
    Good point...LOL. We can plainly see that love is blind.

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  8. This was funny and clever. Reminds me of the "who's on first" bit by abbott and costello.

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  9. The circle of life...relationships....round and round we go. I like the ending :)
    Sending you Love, Light and Joy, Tim :)
    Kelly

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  10. SHE,
    A flattering comparison...THANKS!

    KELLY,
    Wow...you knew just what I wanted for Christmas!

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  11. __Words and phrases so commonly used... the meanings change with each use; well shown.

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  12. DOUG,
    Is it any wonder why relationships are so confusing?

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  13. Wow...I love it!
    the universal story starts over again

    "Haven't I seen you..."

    Let's go 'round one more time!

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  14. haha. love it! think there are quite a few cliche phrases that make this stellar...nicely played one shot!

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  15. love this...is this life or what?? and the loop back...wonderful read..delightful ending...bkm

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  16. does remind me of the pina colada song and long marriages.

    Gloria

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  17. So funny. I was waiting to hear...do you come here often.
    Have a great day.

    My poem is here.

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  18. hahaa..Tim,you got me really! that was fun..loved the word play ;)

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  19. That was really cute and clever, and so fun to read.

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  20. LOVELYANNIE,
    Relationships might be better off if the partners had memories like these two!

    BRIAN,
    i thought, what would happen if you take all those cliches literally?

    BKM,

    When you get really loopy, things tend to loop back!

    GLORIA,
    Pina Colada song...great analogy!

    KB,
    Yeah, that's about the only one I didn't think of. :)

    MAUREEN,
    Glad you enjoyed it...thanks for visiting!

    DESERT ROSE,
    I am flattered!

    LINDA,
    Thanks...nice to see you here!

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  21. ha...very well written and a real good read...great one shot share...cheers pete

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  22. Extremely clever! I really enjoyed this one, Timoteo!

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  23. oh wow tim - that was really clever!

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  24. Enjoyed this a lot. It read like a comedy routine. I like they way you incorporated cliches into something entirely new and fresh. Great work.
    Thank you!

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  25. Ah, twisting cliches to serve a new purpose! Lovely.

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  26. PETE,
    Thanks...having a blast with One Shot!

    SUZI CATE,
    So nice of you to stop by...let me slip into something more comfortable...

    ERIC,
    Appreciate you stopping by.

    CLAUDIA,
    Thanks, and I do so enjoy your poems!

    BEACHANNY,

    Lovely to see you here again!

    PHOENIX-KARENEE,

    Give me a cliche, and I'll twist it! Thanks for your comment.

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  27. Haha, this was great, Tim. And yes, maybe some of us do need shorter memories in our personal relationships.

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  28. The puns, the cliches -- this is just about perfect.

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  29. KOBICO,
    Yeah, I forgot that you snore, so each morning I wake up and romance is still alive!

    GLYNN,
    Thanks--always appreciate your comments!

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  30. That is so funny! I just love it.

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  31. *checks bedroom for cameras and microphones*

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  32. TERESA,
    Welcome...thanks for visiting!

    KOBICO,
    Ha ha...wish I had a camera installed...

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