And we talked about time
and how we sometimes wish
we could get past the unmomentous moment
but that's just willing ourselves
one step closer to death
but we never see it that way
we just want to be nearer to that
which makes us feel more alive
And Time
you smirking sack of shit
I study your face as you perform
your sleight of hands
and when the big one's on twelve
and the little one's on eight
I've come full circle again
heading out the door in a groundhog daze
and all this picture needs
is Sonny and Cher
singing "I Got You Babe"
And the hands of time keep circling
like vultures around
my fledgling schemes
my fledgling schemes
but time is well spent
when one's well spent
and I try to think of what
I'm supposed to be thinking
but it always comes back to you
and every song on the radio
has already read my mind
this much I know is true
you make me feel brand new
I say a little prayer for you...
And Time
you old gypsy man
just once I'd like to land
a swift kick to your cojones
as a token of appreciation
for dragging me down
this one way street
And I think I know what it is...
it's this feeling of being alive
that's so heady and bittersweet
Spinning into a moment
that spits in Time's face
like a fortune cookie that reads:
You are living in an eternity...
the time to be happy is now
Unmomentous moment! I like that!
ReplyDeleteTime is a tricky bastard for sure! Really enjoyed this poem, Tim.
ReplyDeleteTime, our most perverse creation...we are timeless, that much I know, in fact it's the only thing I know. But I don't want to see anyone else I love die...no way. The next to die is me. Well, within my family and you'd be amaze how huge that one has become!
ReplyDeleteJ.COSMO,
ReplyDeleteThanks...who knew that was possible?
TALON,
He's got you by the...whoops, you wouldn't identify with that! LOL
LORRAINE,
We are indeed timeless--that's what makes the illusion of time that we live in so ironic--we are subject to something that doesn't really exist!
and ain't that a kick in the pants...:)
ReplyDeletegreat perspective.
ReplyDeleteHappy Holidays.
Thanks for linking.
Time is relentless, taking the moments we enjoy, slowing down those of pain. If you do find a way to fight time....tell him I'm no fan of his either. Carry on. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI know Time is oh such an enemy but actually not, 'cause we live forever, we may change costumes, country, gender, but it's just one book in a series of book, but Time is infinite, so Timmy you will live forever, rejoyce
ReplyDeleteThis is a masterpiece! Brilliant in it's down-to-earth, yet subtle, deepness. You score again!
ReplyDeletehttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/the-best-christmas-ever/
my pencil
ReplyDeletesaving time on this paper
an erasure
Oooops!
Another pointful run of thought, Tim. _m
Fabulous poem, Tim-- truly. I so love how direct and unpretentious and yet craft-savvy you are! I love these lines especially:
ReplyDeleteAnd Time
you old gypsy man
just once I'd like to land
a swift kick to your cojones
as a token of appreciation
for dragging me down
this one way street
xxxj
nice...give father time a swift kick in the cajones...if you catch hime give him one for me...well played tim
ReplyDeleteTime waits for no man...a truly clever & impressive write that I much enjoyed. Think we can all relate to this...fabulous.
ReplyDeleteAmazing how the most hokey honkey bullcrap lovesongs get profound when the Time is upon you--this is good stuff, Timo--a slick, sweet granola bar of nourishing goodness full of surprise nougaty chews. Loved it.
ReplyDelete"...a fortune cookie that reads:
ReplyDeleteYou are living in an eternity...
the time to be happy is now" YES!!!
Time...I like to have more of it ~
ReplyDeleteNice reflections ~
Wishing you the best times for 2012 ;-)
Think we all want more, but that smirking sack of shit won't let it happen..haha
ReplyDeleteWowzers, you said a mouthful I can SO relate to here, kiddo. Let's see what 2012 rolls out for us........I especially love, "time, you old gypsy man", and "the time to be happy is now." I look forward to more views through the eyes of Timoteo all through 2012. Thanks, Tim.
ReplyDeletethe time to be happy is now...true.. i love to look at times as an old gypsy man...takes away the "natural" pressure..very cool..sometimes wish i could hold that old gypsy man and drag him to the dance floor to just dwell in the moment..
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your comments: LORRAINE, MARBLES, MAGYAR, JENNE, BRIAN, HEDGE, SHERRY, JINGLE, DAN, LOUISE, LAURA X, HEAVEN, PAT HATT !
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to seeing you, and reading your great stuff in the new year!
LORRAINE: I can always count on you to step back and give lay out the big picture for us. And of course, you are right--we do live forever. Changing costumes is a good way of putting it. We're here at the Masquerade Ball--and often the ego gets in the way and wants to keep on that same old raggedy dress--that's why we lament the passage of time.
2 things I picked up on in your last post, Mr. Catnip ... 1.) Gypsy ... there is nothing wrong with being a gypsy ... I am a Roma gypsy ... and I am happy ... 2.) Happy ... Why, of course, or have you ever met a Roma who's not happy, well, have you? Wishing you a very happy New Year, Mr. Catnip. Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteOh its a great piece... Liked it so much...
ReplyDeleteWish you happy new year...
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/12/whisper-no-one-is-there-in-living-haiku.html
At Twitter @VerseEveryDay
I love the image of time dragging us down a one way street and the fortune cookie message. I posted a poem about time a couple of weeks ago. http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2011/12/on-the-clock-time-fights-for-its-right-to-be-free/ In this week's poem time also plays a role.
ReplyDeleteCAT: I love gypsies too. My dog's name is Gypsy!
ReplyDeleteHave a happy!
Thanks for coming by, SHASHI!
COLLEEN: Welcome aboard!
Ho-hum...
ReplyDeleteGadzooks! Sir Silley lives!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this, the narrative, nice!
ReplyDeletehappy gooseberry day!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2012/01/01/if-but-a-fairytale/
ah great, great work here, love that second stanza - "And Time
ReplyDeleteyou smirking sack of shit
I study your face as you perform
your sleight of hands" - time is a smirking sack of shit indeed ha - great musings here! nice to read!