why the aliens
(not the ones at the border)
look the way they do
with their huge eyes
and heads and
emaciated bodies
but it's easy to figure out
Brick and mortar died
and it became so effortless
for us to have everything we wanted
ordered online and delivered
right to our door
from food
to the clothes we wear
to the cars we drive
We never had to leave the house
(except when the toilet was backed up)
we never got any exercise
we sat for hours upon end
day and night
staring into our phones
and it made our eyes
and our heads grow huge
and our bodies devolve into
these little stick figures
And you've always wondered why
the "aliens" look so strange
but they are from the future
And yes
they are us
That clears things up tremendously, thank you so much, friend Tim … she wolf always said to me: "your dad was a drunk dane … green beady eyes, red hair all over, but I fell for him" … This your poem is almost as great as your poem "U" … but "U" still speaks the total truth and every time I read it I cry. Anyway … Love, cat.
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DeleteSo glad U like this one!
DeleteIs that some alien language? Clue me in.
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DeleteIs this for the Tuesday prompt? For Day two of NAPOWRIMO?
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Delete__ I was like confounded yesterday, a youngster that was like under like complete control, like combing his hair by looking into like one of his cell phones, as he clasped the other one too, like side by side. Now, like who taught him, like how to use that like ancient comb_?
ReplyDeleteLike totally...but that's some real ingenuity there, right? Maybe there's hope for us yet--ha ha
DeleteWhat a fun way to introduce a new stage in human evolution! :) thanks for that one.
ReplyDeleteIf we put a "D" before evolution then we will sum things up quite nicely.Thanks for dropping by, Kenia!
DeleteUnique and thought-provoking poem. Love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much. Good to see you!
DeleteOh dear, all too believable.
ReplyDeleteWe could do the usual Tuesday Platform or (optionally) follow some prompt suggestions.
ReplyDelete(Trying to reply to the conversation with Toni, above.)
DeleteI finally figured that out. Thanks Rosemary!
DeleteUmmm I seriously hope that's not our future selves, Tim ..
ReplyDeleteMe too. Though it seems like the most logical explanation!
DeleteOh that big head and small body! The thumbs are definitely gonna evolve. I believe on some level the past, present and future exists all at once, like parts of the Big Bang can still be seen.
ReplyDeleteI'm with you on that, Colleen.
DeleteOh, this made me smile. We socialize one a computer so we don't have to human interact. On every street are rows of alien pods.
ReplyDeleteAlien pods...and I thought there were L'eggs in there!
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