Tuesday, August 13, 2019
THE ONLY CONCRETE THINGS IN LIFE
An encore presentation from about three years back. I know that some of you haven't seen it.
Sidewalks speak
of cig butts and spittle,
old women in door stoops,
poetry cafes and musty smelling bookshops--
the clack of high heels,
the cadence of raindrops,
and children running.
Sidewalks speak
of jackhammers, sirens, and horns--
of just before,
and the moment after,
the corner store
and the ring of laughter.
Sidewalks speak
of dog shit, baby carriages, and
ice cream cones melting in the sun.
Of epithets hurled, flags unfurled,
five o'clock shadows, gutters,
teenagers on the run.
Sidewalks speak
of swirling lights
painted faces
and tango dancers.
Sidewalks speak...
but no one answers.
Sidewalks caution:
WATCH YOUR STEP!
for the road twists and bends.
Life is a nameless corner
where the sidewalk ends.
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I love everything about this. You took me to the city streets, so much teeming life......but those two last lines...????? Killer! Just so good!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sherry. Always great to hear from you!
ReplyDeleteLife is certainly like a sidewalk.
ReplyDeleteDon't trip over the curb!
DeleteThose closing lines are stellar..!! Lovely write :D
ReplyDeleteThanks, and always good to hear from you, Sanaa.
DeleteTim, I wouldn't argue a thing about any of these speakings. I suppose the folk might be loking for other areas but in your defense, you had to come to an end. Right away I am thinking of the various street crimes, shooting murder for should would be on my silent list.
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Thanks Jim. Yes, there are too many things that could be witnessed to include in an ordinary length poem. I wanted it to show the routine everyday occurrences, as a slice of life (as opposed to death).
DeleteAnd you did a very good job doing that.
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Your sidewalks speak loudly to me! Terrific poem. And I like the philosophical note at the end, particularly the closing couplet.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rosemary. I think different interpretations could be made of the closing lines...to me, it means that when the sidewalk ends, you're on your own, or as Jim Morrison put it: "Like a dog without a bone/an actor out alone..."
DeleteYou really painted a vivid picture of busy city streets. I too love that ending.
ReplyDeleteThanks Debi...I'm interested in how readers might interpret those last two lines.
DeleteI love the second stanza and the closing couplet.
ReplyDeleteOoh...thanks for dat, Ava!
DeleteAs U know, I walk along da sidewalk all de time when goin 2 work at 2310hrs sharp almost every nite ... and me never scared of anything then ... but me scared of day time side walk peeps ... odd but true ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteYeah, just remember that there are more crazy peeps running loose in the streets than there are in all the institutions put together!
DeleteSidewalks see so many things. I love the way your words flow, and your quirky sense of life!
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Thanks so much for stopping by, Opal. I had an Opal once :)
Deletelove that close ~
ReplyDeleteThank you...I think we're moving toward a consensus (smiles)
DeleteRaw cameos of sidewalk life...So graphic...And the final alignment...the nameless corner...as if still waiting for some new identity.
ReplyDeleteThere it is...waiting to be molded...like our lives.
Delete__Such richness you've written here Tim... we'll all take another step.
ReplyDeletethis well seen pathway
we step to the next crossway
a smell of coffee
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Thanks, Doug. I love that...and I love the smell of coffee beans (even though I don't drink it) and all the smells of the city.(Well, most anyway).
DeleteNice. That's why you gotta take off shoes in the house.
ReplyDeleteThere's a little piece of the city
DeleteOn the bottom of my shoe
I don't want to peel it off
That's why I ask you
This is such a well crafted piece. It starts so concrete and at the end it becomes metaphorical, but the control throughout is handled beautifully.
ReplyDeleteThank you Carol--so nice to see you!
DeleteI simply love that closing... a little bit like like Peter and the wolf we will not listen to such talkative sidewalks until it's too late.
ReplyDeleteEveryone has something to tell us, eh?
DeleteI have still not learned to talk sidewalk.
DeleteSuch an unexpected final stanza - and I love that surprise element.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, Marilyn.
DeleteFantastic. I so enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you!
DeleteSuperb! I love the juxtaposed images. Great poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Buddah!
DeleteThis poem gives a peak into the world sidewalks live in - used and not appreciated. Great poem.
ReplyDeleteWe all feel like that sometimes--lol
DeleteI really dig this. Excellent work.
ReplyDeleteThank you. She. Remember that movie, "She?"
DeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by!
DeleteWhoa--what a great metaphor for life. I'm a rural person, as much as possible, but I remember spending a summer in the Bronx back in the '60's and you really captured that experience for me. The only thing I can think of that (I think) you missed is the kids opening up the fire hydrants for an experience as close as they could get to swimming, I suppose.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Victoria. Knowing me, if I'd included fire hydrants, it probably would have had something to do with dogs.
DeleteLove this poem...bookmarked it. Just wish we had more of those poetry cafes and musty smelling bookshops...
ReplyDeleteI'm so with you on that. Thanks for the bookmark!
DeleteI bet you had fun with this! Don't forget the chewing gum residue on your shoes...
ReplyDeleteI thought it was gum, but no such luck. Next time I'll stay out of the dog park.
DeleteMy favorite lines:
ReplyDelete"Sidewalks speak
of swirling lights
painted faces
and tango dancers."
I like this very much. Reminds me of the phrase, "ah, if walls could speak" only in a cityscape! :)
If walls could talk
Deleteand sidewalks could speak
I'd be tuning in
lest it was in Greek
"Life is a nameless corner
ReplyDeletewhere the sidewalk ends"
Oh I'm minded of Shel Silverstain here in this wonderful write. Especially that ending. So many wonderful lines.
Thanks, to someone with a wonderful name!
DeleteWow, sidewalks are EXACTLY like this! Love those closing lines. The sidewalk abruptly ending. Yoiks.
ReplyDeleteMuchas Gracias, Sherry. There's a lot of things on the sidewalk that will get stuck to your shoe that I didn't even mention!
DeleteI remember. I remember thinking the last two lines are a poem unto themselves.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Toni. It still gives me an eerie feeling when I meditate on those lines!
DeleteGreat poem! I love the ending!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dwight!
DeleteThis is so good, Timoteo. It reminds me of the thought process that goes into poems like those based on Wallace's 13 Blackbirds. Careful observation and good sensory details.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kind words, Victoria. 13 Blackbirds..."it was evening all afternoon" stands out for me. Sometimes you get a line like that and it's goosebumps because it's so descriptive in so few lines.
DeleteYou brought the sidewalks to life like a sensory experience. There are stories behind every sight and sound, which always intrigues me....well except for dog shit. Not much more I'd want to know about that.
ReplyDeleteHa ha..thank you, Mish...the dog doo doo is all a part of the sights and smells of the sidewalk...and sometimes the bottom of your shoe!
DeleteSidewalks are walking a line that none stay on for long, like you said a jumping-off point, where life begins.
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