Saturday, July 22, 2017
NO QUESTIONS ASKED
Bet U didn't think about
why you're with
U-NO-HOO
today
and betcha didn't reflect on why
you're even with
U-NO-HOO
yesterday either
maybe U thought about it
way back when for a bit
but hey U got some
body
and so U do it by rote
cuz some
body
is better than no
body
right?
maybe
me
I don't need no
body
just to have some
body
around
but if I ever do
I'll dig up some of the ones
that are in the back yard
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That was a delightful read indeed, warm greetings to you!
ReplyDeleteNice to see you here!
DeleteWell that is that (or ?)
ReplyDeletewho knows what evil lurks in the next installment--lol
DeleteTruth is, we all prostitute ourselves in one way or another ... work or play ... for money or for free ... in sickness or in health ... til death do us part. Love, cat.
ReplyDelete"Til death do us part" is what is killing us :)
DeleteTsk....necrophilia is soooo old hat this year:)
ReplyDeleteWell, I'm old school you know--ha ha
DeleteDark little poem - but humorous. I like the twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteThanks...a little twist for the twisted!
DeleteHaha! Well then.
ReplyDeleteLike I always say...I can dig it
DeleteMakes sense.. You bring me to ponder upon self worth.. sigh..
ReplyDeleteThat's good :)
DeleteIt's cool...I agree with Sanaa...
ReplyDeleteThanks. Good to see you.
DeleteGritty and perhaps a tad bitter. No, maybe more than a tad. Love that dark humor.
ReplyDeleteBitter is gone. Dead and buried, so to speak :)
DeleteI'm guessing you haven't invited your former English teachers to come read your work... or are they the ones in the backyard? :)
ReplyDeleteSome of them easily could be!
DeleteThis brings such a intensity and the ending was wow! I didn't see it coming. Necrophilia sure finds its way through history especially with 'Ed gein'. Awesome! poem my friend. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks. It's like that old Dean Martin song, "Every Body Loves Some Body Sometime"
DeleteLike the end :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jane. Now I'm trying to console the beginning because it feels left out.
DeleteNice ending about the body in the backyard.
ReplyDeleteYa gotta put em somewhere,eh?
DeleteI love the tongue-in-cheek humor!
ReplyDeleteIf it makes you laugh, I'll even stick my tongue out at you :)
ReplyDeleteBest ending ever. I laughed so hard, my husband came to see what was going on.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing.
Oh, that warms my heart, Magaly!
ReplyDeleteWow! That last line was a dozzie!
ReplyDeleteAnnell: Miles of smiles
DeleteUm, I've been doing some online dating lately and I'm here to tell you that with the guys I've been meeting, I'll gladly do without some body until I find just the right "body." But not that one in the back yard...shudder!
ReplyDeleteYeah...it takes all kinds, and you will meet all of 'em playing that game...more along the lines of the bad and the ugly rather than the good--lol
DeleteMade me laugh and then think of the Billy Connolly joke, about the wife buried in the back yard, on his first TV appearance with Parkinson in the UK. Made him a star.
ReplyDeleteThanks, my man. I remember seeing him once, I'll have to check him out again.
DeleteThe things we would see if we could look inside each and understand what's there (care for what's there). And not just part of social norms beliefs, but as a celebration of humanity, individuality, self...
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Nicely stated.
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