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Monday, August 20, 2012



rotting fruits and vegetables
atop the compost heap--
breeze wafting my way


spring rain
tires splashing--
you dripping by


sexy dream
suddenly interrupted...
cat's paws

22 comments:

  1. Hitting the right notes in so few words - the mark of a true wordsmith, Timoteo!

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  2. all very visual, even the wrinkled nose I felt...great stuff!

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  3. __I wonder if a soft snore sounds like a cats purr... to a cat. Purr... snore, the cat's
    'pause'?
    __Like it Timoteo! _m

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  4. Wow that's almost my life, except I don't compost,not now not ever...but I do recycle :) I like your writing style Tim

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  5. woww...short and so full....enjoyed this....

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  6. Liked these a lot. I am all too familiar with the feline-us interruptus at dawn ("where's my breakfast?!") problem. So many dreams lost.

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  7. Somehow I knew you would have a wild way with senryu.

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  8. MARIAN: Nice deflection!

    SREEJA: Nice to meet you--thanks so much for the visit!

    PATTIKEN: So many dreams lost, but it's nice to be licked upon awakening, anyway! ;)

    KERRY: You know me well, my dear.

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  9. I love these..everything form compost to kitty.

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  10. SUZIE: Thanks so much. One of the ads now running below is for a CAT BOX!

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  11. What a shame! I would want any sexy dreams to linger on,Tim! Wonderful write!

    Hank

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  12. I can truly relate to that compost pile, and I need to add a lot more to it. Gotta love those cat paws!

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  13. WOW. This line is SOOOO good: "you dripping by"

    And then you follow it up with that last stanza. Really like this. :)

    "sexy dream
    suddenly interrupted...
    cat's paws"

    Fun and disappointing. Better (complete) dreams tonight, I hope.

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  14. see...this is why i don't have a cat...ha..smiles

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  15. KAYKUALA, TERESA, FLIPSIDERECORDS, AUDREY (you wild woman): Thanks, y'all. There will be more sexy dreams...uh...I hope anyway.

    CLAUDIA: What foresight you have!

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  16. how you get from rotting fruit to sex dreams...i dunno...the cat would learn to live outside as well....smiles....

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  17. I hate it when that happens! Damn cat! LOL!

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  18. Scent, sounds, sensations and intimacy interrupted all in so few words? Wonderful.

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  19. Dear friend,
    Great poem with a cute and funny ending. Kiss the cat for me (LOL). Thanks for sharing.

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