tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post7594625760704570551..comments2024-01-02T17:11:24.498-07:00Comments on Catnip: STARS ON WATERTimoteohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-37948547360751206882011-11-27T13:38:50.709-07:002011-11-27T13:38:50.709-07:00LORRAINE,
You hurt that whore's feelings, sayi...LORRAINE,<br />You hurt that whore's feelings, saying she doesn't belong! <br />:)Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-16256391112259666152011-11-27T04:58:44.154-07:002011-11-27T04:58:44.154-07:00Photo and poem enchanted me now take the whore out...Photo and poem enchanted me now take the whore out she doesn't belong...I'll catch up eventually now that I found you againLorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-1321631115752691142011-11-13T17:50:31.156-07:002011-11-13T17:50:31.156-07:00JENNY,
I used to play Santa at a pet store, and pe...JENNY,<br />I used to play Santa at a pet store, and people would bring any kind of animal and the animals would sit on my lap...then their kids would sit on my lap, and it was a pretty unruly bunch! Sometimes they would fight like cats and dogs!<br /><br />PAT,<br />Glad you liked that...sometimes I can't help but say what's on my mind! What a concept!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-41999615537667254282011-11-13T07:51:59.436-07:002011-11-13T07:51:59.436-07:00Ah, I like this dreamy side of you. Thanks for the...Ah, I like this dreamy side of you. Thanks for the comment on "Can you love me?" Made me smile. hugs, patpatceganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05215631272813490203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-37536924014650691952011-11-12T13:06:27.491-07:002011-11-12T13:06:27.491-07:00just called to say hello tim and see what your up ...just called to say hello tim and see what your up too anything wicked going on lol bonfire night over xmas next are you being santa or do you get knee ache lol xxjenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-15830412340817353502011-11-09T19:34:02.754-07:002011-11-09T19:34:02.754-07:00TINKWELBORN, CHEVREFEUILLE, TEKIA:
Thanks so much...TINKWELBORN, CHEVREFEUILLE, TEKIA:<br /><br />Thanks so much first time commentors...happy to see you!<br /><br />MORNING, THE ORANGE TREE, LYNNAIMA:<br /><br />Much appreciated! <br /><br />RIVER,<br />Wonderful to see you flowing my way again.<br /><br />CLAUDIA,<br />Glad you got a smile out of that!<br /><br />BRIAN, PAT HATT:<br />So nice to hear from two of my favorite poets.<br /><br />HEDGEWITCH,<br /><br />I know what you mean...I've always been starry-eyed myself. <br /><br />KATHY,<br />Thanks for the first time visit!<br /><br />VICTORIA,<br />Yes, that's from a legend about how the cosmos was created. "Vewy intewesting" don't you think?Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-3856919981281915892011-11-09T12:47:37.753-07:002011-11-09T12:47:37.753-07:00Amazing imagery, Tim. I felt like I was camping ou...Amazing imagery, Tim. I felt like I was camping out watching stars. Loved the Great Comer stanza. Clever.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-73427360806528743062011-11-08T22:25:58.380-07:002011-11-08T22:25:58.380-07:00I too am all about the milk wagons and the whores ...I too am all about the milk wagons and the whores on chop suey! Show stoppers!Kathy Bischopinghttp://drinkthenewwine.blogspot.com/2011/07/pocahontas.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-10044775403691615332011-11-08T19:32:03.307-07:002011-11-08T19:32:03.307-07:00Another damn good poem, Timo. We need only believe...Another damn good poem, Timo. We need only believe in mysteries, and even if we don't--there they are. I spend many sleepless hours under the stars, and you do start thinking this stuff. They seem to have their own dynamic going on, totally separate, yet graciously inviting us to receive their light. Whispering pines--they really do seem to. Excellent stuff.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-18652093216370212162011-11-08T17:11:13.303-07:002011-11-08T17:11:13.303-07:00I'm in awe, wonderful image filled piece, not ...I'm in awe, wonderful image filled piece, not a crack at anything to be found.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-12480023650976928792011-11-08T15:07:18.700-07:002011-11-08T15:07:18.700-07:00well it could be messy but also a bit of fun...well it could be messy but also a bit of fun...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-70233230111530268792011-11-08T14:52:38.555-07:002011-11-08T14:52:38.555-07:00i love the milk wagons and the whores eating chop ...i love the milk wagons and the whores eating chop suey cracked me up...enjoyed..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-83114865162046802962011-11-08T14:49:43.210-07:002011-11-08T14:49:43.210-07:00Goodness...I lost what I wrote well here I go agai...Goodness...I lost what I wrote well here I go again....<br />Timoteo this is my favorite poem of yours I have read so far. It is beautiful, magical, with mystery. So many images I just love. Heres one..<br /><br />Moving ceaselessly in search<br />Of a vanished dawn.<br /><br />The sleeping forest<br />Crisp and cold.<br />A jewel in the moonlight. :)River Urkehttp://riverurkepoetry.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-56243923065427872632011-11-07T23:58:46.562-07:002011-11-07T23:58:46.562-07:00This is an awesome piece! I enjoyed it! Great use ...This is an awesome piece! I enjoyed it! Great use of beautiful imagery. Bravo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-6949035849912717362011-11-07T19:47:02.927-07:002011-11-07T19:47:02.927-07:00Nicely done, a living picture. The Stars allways a...Nicely done, a living picture. The Stars allways a great inspiration. Thank you for sharing.<br /><br />moon gazing<br />in the midst of autumn<br />the scent of leavesChèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-43495094039662029532011-11-07T18:47:12.404-07:002011-11-07T18:47:12.404-07:00very visual, contextual, seminal.very visual, contextual, seminal.tinkwelbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14163026661564191285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-69538361021537848642011-11-07T17:03:48.281-07:002011-11-07T17:03:48.281-07:00I think this is a fabulous poem, but I have to adm...I think this is a fabulous poem, but I have to admit, my brain did a flip-flop on the "whores eating chop suey" line. In one way, it seems totally out of place in a beautiful piece of poetry, but in another, it seems to give it a character much needed in our mundane "cerulean" world. If you get my drift. All that said, darn good write!<br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/07/the-wonder-of-you/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/07/the-wonder-of-you/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-40939794355546159352011-11-07T13:01:58.110-07:002011-11-07T13:01:58.110-07:00"moving ceaselessly in search of a vanished d..."moving ceaselessly in search of a vanished dawn" real strong phrase, real strong, I love! :)<br />happy gooseberry day!<br /><br /><br />http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/11/06/the-way-we-sex-adult-supervision-is-advised/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-27834453850447295762011-11-07T12:42:11.816-07:002011-11-07T12:42:11.816-07:00yes, I do believe in mysteries.
cheers.yes, I do believe in mysteries.<br /><br />cheers.The Orange Treehttp://cooloceanwaves.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-27565265879532643192011-11-07T08:59:26.691-07:002011-11-07T08:59:26.691-07:00the opening and ending are beautiful.
this is a fa...the opening and ending are beautiful.<br />this is a fantastic write.<br /><br />poetic and touching.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-26914123738368783532011-11-05T15:23:47.624-07:002011-11-05T15:23:47.624-07:00JENNY,
You're a good mom to your dog...mine ha...JENNY,<br />You're a good mom to your dog...mine hates fireworks too. Have a cozy evening. Let's toast!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-54827858580269930942011-11-05T13:50:45.133-07:002011-11-05T13:50:45.133-07:00hi tim saturday night just came to say hello firew...hi tim saturday night just came to say hello fireworks here so im stayin in looking after my doggie and havin a nice bottle of cava have fun xxjenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-33778088874041766092011-11-05T10:10:59.631-07:002011-11-05T10:10:59.631-07:00BRIAN,
I thought about: Whores driving milk wagons...BRIAN,<br />I thought about: Whores driving milk wagons while eating chop suey...but nah!<br /><br />BUBBA,<br />True, one does not actually need to witness whores eating chop suey to register the audio connection to deer snorts...it's quite a tickling visual as well!<br /><br />SHERRY,<br />My good friend Sherry--thanks so much!<br /><br />JENNY,<br />You have to follow some hookers around until you see them go into a Chinese restaurant...<br /><br />THINGY,<br />Glad you liked that one, babe!<br /><br />THE PURPLE,<br />Thanks for your comment, and for being such a colorful person.<br /><br />MAGYAR,<br />Just LOVE your haiku, and happy to be of some inspiration for it!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-77360669377703436312011-11-04T19:13:23.730-07:002011-11-04T19:13:23.730-07:00Your words... just grand, and therein this... stil...Your words... just grand, and therein this... still your words, moved about a bit. _m<br /><br />campfires<br />fade into memory's ember<br />summer's endMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-2377416003555365432011-11-04T19:10:15.593-07:002011-11-04T19:10:15.593-07:00incredible, the imagery is mind blowing.incredible, the imagery is mind blowing.The Purple Treehousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18085238053875049021noreply@blogger.com