tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post2323875245367950284..comments2024-01-02T17:11:24.498-07:00Comments on Catnip: HANDFUL OF DUSTTimoteohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-10599741119855437712012-01-21T20:06:37.351-07:002012-01-21T20:06:37.351-07:00Such vivid imagery. What a romp. I loved it!Such vivid imagery. What a romp. I loved it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-28551811393477016992012-01-20T11:02:21.032-07:002012-01-20T11:02:21.032-07:00Brilliant imagery - love it!
Anna :o]Brilliant imagery - love it!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-40721955107523409672012-01-19T10:27:43.970-07:002012-01-19T10:27:43.970-07:00HEDGEWITCH: I must have had you in mind when I wro...HEDGEWITCH: I must have had you in mind when I wrote it. LOL<br /><br />SHERRY: Thanks for checking in--hope you are doing well.<br /><br />CLAUDIA: Your comments always appreciated. (Did I mention I really liked your singing with the guitar?) <br /><br />ARRON: Thanks. Some have mentioned it would be a good performance poem--next time I do that, I will include it!<br /><br />NATASHA: You're too kind to me (but don't stop...don't STOP!!!)<br /><br />EVIL SQUIRREL: How wonderful to hear from you again! Hope to see more of you.<br /><br />CHARLES: Thanks, buddy. Remember the first time you put a press-on tattoo on your arm and freaked your mother out?<br /><br />LORI: How you doin'? Wishing you the best, as always!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-20937570045768833992012-01-18T21:32:45.510-07:002012-01-18T21:32:45.510-07:00wow, this is really great. I can see her clearly, ...wow, this is really great. I can see her clearly, and you kept me engaged 'till the end. Well done :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-27692023203948574162012-01-18T19:37:32.008-07:002012-01-18T19:37:32.008-07:00Like something out of a Tibetan demon Tanka! chill...Like something out of a Tibetan demon Tanka! chilling. This really stood out for me:<br /><br />Faced with the ghosts of<br />the past, your summer love<br />will fade like a press-on tattoo.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-31397547473412675472012-01-18T17:14:20.016-07:002012-01-18T17:14:20.016-07:00Hi Tim, it seems I have been away from your site t...Hi Tim, it seems I have been away from your site too long, I've missed your poems, haha.<br /><br />I'm glad to be back here, and this one's gotta be my favorite. Carrie White came to mind...Cynthshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07461131843626769371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-17995591303102860622012-01-18T17:05:17.782-07:002012-01-18T17:05:17.782-07:00I'm with Arron...aloud is excellence! And like...I'm with Arron...aloud is excellence! And like Claudia, that song will be with me till next OpenLinkNight. This is magical, mysterious, I didn't want it to end, but even that, you handled perfectly. Standing ovation on this one. Gold star, Poet!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-73835457613321163152012-01-18T10:16:28.973-07:002012-01-18T10:16:28.973-07:00outstanding piece - top 2 toe - i loved it. read a...outstanding piece - top 2 toe - i loved it. read aloud it soars! :)Arron Shillinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17989854352644796752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-39896377539645931362012-01-17T22:34:14.361-07:002012-01-17T22:34:14.361-07:00Crimson And clover
over and over...makes me hum th...Crimson And clover<br />over and over...makes me hum that song...probably all day long now...ha<br />love the description of her...whew...quite the character lady...surely not boring.. great write timClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-69158951008872034612012-01-17T21:50:00.205-07:002012-01-17T21:50:00.205-07:00Wow, what a tale this is. Great images, fantastic ...Wow, what a tale this is. Great images, fantastic mood. I especially love "A handful of dust. Tambourines."Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-47051899334499807512012-01-17T21:43:00.011-07:002012-01-17T21:43:00.011-07:00Sometimes you freak me completely out with your ab...Sometimes you freak me completely out with your ability to get inside my head with your images, make me feel I know or worse yet, *am* the characters--this is really rock solid work, Timo. "your summer love/ will fade like a press-on tattoo...' so been there done that. Fine poem.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-55824817756801202972012-01-17T21:29:46.843-07:002012-01-17T21:29:46.843-07:00BUDDAH: Thanks for your enlightening comment.
SUS...BUDDAH: Thanks for your enlightening comment.<br /><br />SUSIE: Much appreciated, and so nice to see you here.<br /><br />PAT: LOL<br /><br />TERESA: Thank you my dear...yeah, gravity--that's inevitable...I still prefer the natural look, though!<br /><br />CAT: I'll check it out. I think I tried to smoke catnip once back in the day...MISTAKE! LOL<br /><br />BRIAN: Glad you like, my friend.Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-11970953083038249302012-01-17T21:03:18.180-07:002012-01-17T21:03:18.180-07:00i think your close is marvelous...she sounds quite...i think your close is marvelous...she sounds quite the character..and that life perhaps helped her along that path as well...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-13623199608232794852012-01-17T20:54:17.453-07:002012-01-17T20:54:17.453-07:00Another great read, my friend P! This like trip do...Another great read, my friend P! This like trip down memory lane ... I wrote a piece once called 'Patchouli' a while ago ... should be still there somewhere in my blog ... in case you interested to scroll down a bit ... uhm, I wonder ... maybe catnip smokable ... Meow! cat. http://catsruledogsdroole.blogspot.com/^.^https://www.blogger.com/profile/17422876955246850636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-14498785425340389232012-01-17T20:25:06.121-07:002012-01-17T20:25:06.121-07:00I love your poetry! You always create the most fa...I love your poetry! You always create the most fascinating characters. I must say though, bras are necessary because gravity works. :-)Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-19364057231705757392012-01-17T20:14:36.949-07:002012-01-17T20:14:36.949-07:00I hate those alternate endings, they are usually a...I hate those alternate endings, they are usually alternate for a reason..haha...and dust ewww, dead skin cells stir up my ocd..lolPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-53443388321211864552012-01-17T20:13:59.213-07:002012-01-17T20:13:59.213-07:00Each line..each piece of this so beautiful...frant...Each line..each piece of this so beautiful...frantic at times..peaceful in others..it captured my imagination from the first line.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-48378698052803024672012-01-17T19:31:37.139-07:002012-01-17T19:31:37.139-07:00This has so many different images and layers to it...This has so many different images and layers to it - its a great read. Thanks, moskowitzBuddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.com