tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post6795224044301362084..comments2024-01-02T17:11:24.498-07:00Comments on Catnip: ONCE GOLDENTimoteohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-6029053260581705812010-12-02T13:53:22.346-07:002010-12-02T13:53:22.346-07:00the way my life is going at the mo...i bet your do...the way my life is going at the mo...i bet your dog pawed through the pages, found my entry and then peed on it....a great metaphor - yep i know its been said but it was...cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-1199184011972391092010-12-02T11:21:52.110-07:002010-12-02T11:21:52.110-07:00Emmanuel, Doug,(take heart, dinosaurs will rule th...Emmanuel, Doug,(take heart, dinosaurs will rule the world again someday!)Kkrige, (we'd all like to be the pee'er rather than the pee-ee!)Reflections, Kavisions, (I'd like to read that one) Shashi, Caty...thanks for stopping by and for your beautiful, insightful comments!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-69220109322860859592010-12-02T08:26:26.279-07:002010-12-02T08:26:26.279-07:00love the parallel between the phone book and a hum...love the parallel between the phone book and a human creation! this was terrificCatyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-5181585945739045902010-12-02T08:12:11.607-07:002010-12-02T08:12:11.607-07:00Hi Timoteo
You have a very interesting style of w...Hi Timoteo<br /><br />You have a very interesting style of writing as well as seeing the world around you and that makes your verses and thoughts unique.. and I like it every time .. fresh out look of common things...<br />Thanks for sharing...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-18396551720855431062010-12-02T02:15:03.316-07:002010-12-02T02:15:03.316-07:00I hope such dread and misery doesn't befall up...I hope such dread and misery doesn't befall upon anybody/anything! Gee.. Tim, you have so masterfully brought out the pain faced by this discarded little phonebook.. I am sure even the book would appreciate this concern.. I really liked the part where you mention the trees going wasted over a discarded book... nicely done bit, that one!<br />Come to think of it, your poem reminds me of a poem I had written ages ago - Rantings of a disgruntled shopping cart..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-77933159527564620292010-12-01T22:09:32.359-07:002010-12-01T22:09:32.359-07:00Interesting piece, though I have thought of what b...Interesting piece, though I have thought of what books could tell of their readers, have never considered this type of a perspective. You've done well with it tho, had to LOL several times.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-61350402458621155502010-12-01T20:33:45.865-07:002010-12-01T20:33:45.865-07:00Oh, the poor phone book! Enough have commented on ...Oh, the poor phone book! Enough have commented on the allegory to life, so I shan't go there. <br />Ack, who wants to get peed on! Be the pee'er(?no where near a word I am afraid). Happy One shot Tim to another great postKatherine Krigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00737873330498032718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-68415184424257865322010-12-01T19:29:36.868-07:002010-12-01T19:29:36.868-07:00Objective to change, this relic that I am becoming...Objective to change, this relic that I am becoming... still honors those things of the past. _m<br /><br />A Real:<br />Dictionary Phone Book<br />Book Personal Letter <br />Thesaures Lead Pencil <br />Atlas News Paper<br /><br />Wow... what a dinosaur I am!Magyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-16666379112068231102010-12-01T15:15:37.681-07:002010-12-01T15:15:37.681-07:00CLAUDIA,
The first time she peed on it was when th...CLAUDIA,<br />The first time she peed on it was when the ideas began to flow!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-46858910770332922882010-12-01T13:45:44.081-07:002010-12-01T13:45:44.081-07:00A thoughtful one you put up here..very reflective....A thoughtful one you put up here..very reflective.<br /><br />Cheers!Emmanuel Ibokhttp://www.lordemmanuel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-52123558393861223812010-12-01T11:49:59.017-07:002010-12-01T11:49:59.017-07:00what a metaphor..and did you write the poem while ...what a metaphor..and did you write the poem while your doog still peed...?Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-24381591648351441312010-12-01T10:51:35.310-07:002010-12-01T10:51:35.310-07:00Y'all are FANTASTIC, and that means: Repressed...Y'all are FANTASTIC, and that means: RepressedSoul, Dustus, Sherry, Cianphelan, Gay, Hedgewitch, Teresa, KB, Brian, BKM, Desert Rose, River, Lorraine, Lady Nyo, Budh.aaah, Gabriela,Senderupwords, and DeLi ! <br /><br />KB,<br />Yes, I got tired of seeing things land in the gutter...that's why I gave up bowling!<br /><br />DESERT ROSE, <br />You are so sweet to me! When I think about it now, perhaps the book did fulfill a purpose--humble though it may be--if it provided a little more fun for my dog!<br /><br />LORRAINE,<br />Thanks (I'm still coming over there!)Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-593610117479368922010-12-01T08:45:53.707-07:002010-12-01T08:45:53.707-07:00tossed, supposed, closed.... and now its time to r...tossed, supposed, closed.... and now its time to reposeDeLihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15795530327579458125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-49688338279287082542010-12-01T07:55:11.153-07:002010-12-01T07:55:11.153-07:00I love this. Great one shot. Love and Light, Sende...I love this. Great one shot. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-23721277739075574732010-12-01T07:20:15.616-07:002010-12-01T07:20:15.616-07:00Awesome allegory!!!
I love it :)
cheers from Uru...Awesome allegory!!!<br /><br />I love it :)<br /><br />cheers from UruguayGabriela Abalohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11316879938383542026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-78189454007294139632010-12-01T07:02:56.768-07:002010-12-01T07:02:56.768-07:00Tis sad when what we expect turns out totally dif...Tis sad when what we expect turns out totally different from realitybudh.aaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13277544197089022458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-78951096708401255132010-12-01T05:51:30.167-07:002010-12-01T05:51:30.167-07:00That closing stanza did it for me.
Great poem.......That closing stanza did it for me.<br /><br />Great poem....thoughtful.<br /><br />Lady NyoAsobimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-79699572711522542662010-12-01T05:06:21.105-07:002010-12-01T05:06:21.105-07:00I'm in awe again...you are an amazing writer.I'm in awe again...you are an amazing writer.Lorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-30951718104104510072010-12-01T03:26:12.163-07:002010-12-01T03:26:12.163-07:00So true. I loved the metaphor of the phone book an...So true. I loved the metaphor of the phone book and life. You have the best imagination.Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-4278323337362384592010-12-01T02:56:26.147-07:002010-12-01T02:56:26.147-07:00i became addicted to your interesting poems Tim! e...i became addicted to your interesting poems Tim! every time you astonish my mind with another amazing approach to the tiny details we might pass by in our lives, love the sarcastic humor,the reality and the great imagery of your verse..FANTASTIC ONE SHOT my friend..:)<br />yeah,happy for the dog after all ha! ;)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-36751863224981624512010-11-30T23:33:03.997-07:002010-11-30T23:33:03.997-07:00can totally see this...so many phone books, and th...can totally see this...so many phone books, and they keep coming...what a waste...but it made the dog happy...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-80043066240413478282010-11-30T21:14:49.547-07:002010-11-30T21:14:49.547-07:00hoho...thanks for teh chuckle...the dog peeing on ...hoho...thanks for teh chuckle...the dog peeing on you is quite the fate...but there is a ring of truth in your closing lines...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-17388860975240320552010-11-30T20:39:53.765-07:002010-11-30T20:39:53.765-07:00From tree to gutter...what a waste. Excellent One ...From tree to gutter...what a waste. Excellent One Shot.KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-63121312108591734122010-11-30T20:32:32.633-07:002010-11-30T20:32:32.633-07:00I love the way you go between life truths and mund...I love the way you go between life truths and mundane dogs peeing. Great read!Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052731808587837031.post-59364878681327682712010-11-30T20:00:24.387-07:002010-11-30T20:00:24.387-07:00I'm feeling a bit in need of recycling now. Th...I'm feeling a bit in need of recycling now. Those lines about the wanton display and the escort service--quite nicely done. A very entertaining read full of humor and skill.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com